Tibby
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For You
Jul 2, 2006 15:50:52 GMT -5
Post by Tibby on Jul 2, 2006 15:50:52 GMT -5
BTW, Chelsea, as I told you on Yahoo, the story starts good so far! I hope the next chapter will be posted soon! Suspense is killing me ;D
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For You
Jul 2, 2006 16:59:14 GMT -5
Post by sniffen on Jul 2, 2006 16:59:14 GMT -5
You know which eisode I don´t like at all?? Right Man, wrong Time (aka Right Man, Wrong Woman). Yep, that`s and episode I don`t mind to forget
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For You
Jul 5, 2006 23:18:40 GMT -5
Post by Me on Jul 5, 2006 23:18:40 GMT -5
Title: For You
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters used in this story. They belong to whoever own the rights to Walker, Texas Ranger.
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Chapter 2: If I’d…
“C.D.! CALL 9-1-1! NOW!” Walker yelled, hoping that C.D. had heard him.
Walker sat there, in the middle of the street, scared to move Alex out of fear that he would end up hurting her. He didn’t know what to do. He checked her for a pulse and she had one, it wasn’t strong, but it was there.
He just sat there, in the middle of the street, tears in his as he thought about the fight he’d just had with the beautiful woman who was now lying in the middle of the road. “d**n it! If I’d just agreed to set a date for the wedding, then Alex wouldn’t have run out like that and she wouldn’t be lying here now,” Walker said to himself.
Finally, after what felt like forever, the ambulance arrived and Alex was carefully loaded into it.
“Would you like to ride in the ambulance with her?” one of the paramedics asked Walker.
“Umm,” Walker said as he thought, would Alex want him to be with her after what had just happened, but he already knew the answer to that, “Yes.” Walker finally told the paramedic. Walker climbed into the back of the ambulance with the other paramedic and watched as he took Alex’s vitals.
They arrived at Memorial Hospital 10 minutes later and Alex was taken into the emergency room.
Walker paced the floor, the very thought of Alex dying was making him sick to his stomach. He tried to think of good times, but all Walker could think about was how upset Alex had been not even 30 minutes, when he had wanted to wait to set the wedding date and get married, but he wouldn’t tell her why. And truth be told, Walker wasn’t sure why he didn’t want to yet either.
C.D. and Trivette arrived at Memorial Hospital a little while later. They found Walker pacing a hole in the floor of the waiting room. They stood there and watched him for several minutes, not knowing what to say to him.
Trivette was the first one to speak up. “Have you heard anything about Alex yet?”
Walker stopped and looked up. “No,” he said before he started pacing once more.
“Why don’t you sit down Cordell?” C.D. asked.
Walker stopped again. “Because that’s not going to help Alex,” he said plain and simple, but both C.D. and Trivette could see the pain in his eyes as he said it.
“Well Cordell, pacin’ a hole in the floor isn’t goin’ help that little lady either,” C.D. told him and Walker knew he was right.
Walker finally sat down, knowing that there wasn’t anything he could do right now and he hated that. He hated not being able to have control over the situation and he hated that there was nothing he could do to help Alex.
C.D. sat down next to him, “Cordell, she’s gonna be okay you know. That little lady is tough and she’ll be just fine.”
Walker looked up, about to say something when the doctor came in. Walker jumped up from his sit. “How is she doctor?”
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Let me know what y'all think. Thanks.
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For You
Jul 5, 2006 23:24:32 GMT -5
Post by Megan on Jul 5, 2006 23:24:32 GMT -5
Poor Alex I hope she'll be okay!! I cant wait to read the next part....great job!!
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Post by Kayla on Jul 6, 2006 0:05:18 GMT -5
I hope Alex is okay. Another great chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens.
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For You
Jul 6, 2006 13:10:32 GMT -5
Post by anabuhnahnuh on Jul 6, 2006 13:10:32 GMT -5
oO. I read this on fanfic last night. again, I scream "where's the rest of it?!?!??!!!"
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For You
Jul 13, 2006 22:42:42 GMT -5
Post by Me on Jul 13, 2006 22:42:42 GMT -5
Okay, this chapter still isn't the longest, but it ain't the shortest either.
Title: For You
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters used in this story. They belong to whoever own the rights to Walker, Texas Ranger.
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Chapter 3: Even If She…
Walker waited for several seconds and then asked the doctor again. “How is she?” Walker was becoming really nervous. Was there really something so wrong with Alex that even he couldn’t hear it? What was Alex died or something? No she’s not! She can’t be…can she?
“Doctor, how is she?” it was Trivette who spoke up this time.
“Well,” the doctor started to tell them, “There’s no easy way to tell you this gentlemen. Miss Cahill is in serious condition. When she was hit, she fell back and did a lot of damage to her head. Her broken legs are helping much either and the fact that she’s in a coma isn’t good either. Even if she ever wakes up she may…”
“What do you mean ‘if she ever wakes up,’” Walker interrupted the doctor.
“Ranger, Miss Cahill could be in the coma a day or for years. And even if she wakes up, she may never walk again. I’m sorry, there’s no pretty way to say it. We’re doing everything we can for her, but there’s only so much we can do. Now listen Ranger, Miss Cahill is a very strong, very healthy woman, so she already has that on her side,” the doctor said and then checked his watch. “I’m sorry but I have to go. Feel free to go visit Miss Cahill. Try talking to her, like she’s awake. We’ve found that that usually helps. Even if she doesn’t respond, she could still be listening”
He felt helpless. There was nothing he could do this time; he’d lose control of the situation. Now Alex was in the hospital in a coma and the most that he could do was talk to her.
Walker walked to Alex’s room slowly. He wanted to see; but could he see her? Could he really see Alex knowing that if he would have just talked about their wedding and been open with her that maybe just maybe see wouldn’t be lying in a hospital bed.
Finally reaching Alex’s room, Walker opened the door and slowly made his way inside. Alex looked so weird. She had a cast on each of her legs, her head was wrapped where she had been hit, and she was hooked up to more machines then Walker had ever seen in his life.
But her left hand wasn’t hooked up to anything. And the ring that Walker had put on her finger so many months ago was still there. As gently as he could, Walker picked up Alex’s hand. He rubbed the back of it with his thumb and just thought for a minute.
Then Walker started to talk to her. “Alex, baby, I’m so sorry that this happened. I could have stopped it all if I would have just sat a wedding date with you or at least told you why I couldn’t yet. But I honestly don’t know why I can’t. I love you Alex with all my heart and I want you to get better baby. I want to marry you and I want to have children with you. And as soon as you’re out of this place and all better, I’m gonna sit down with you and plan our wedding; together. But first, you have to get better honey. I love you.”
C.D. and Trivette were waiting outside for Walker to finish talking to Alex. They were going to go in with him, but at the last second, they had decided against it.
They waited for five more minutes before going into Alex’s room. They found Walker holding her hand, still rubbing it with the back of his thumb, but he wasn’t saying anything. He just stood there, last in his thoughts.
“You okay Cordell?” C.D. finally spoke up. Walker didn’t answer. C.D. asked him again, “Are you okay Cordell?”
Walker still didn’t answer. Trivette went up and tapped him on the shoulder. Walker jumped.
“What?” he asked as he turned around, finally taking his eyes off Alex.
“C.D. asked if you were okay man, but you didn’t answer,” Trivette told him.
“Oh…sorry, I was just thinking,” Walker told them.
C.D. walked up and put a reassuring hand on Walker’s shoulder. “She’ll be okay Cordell. That little lady is one tough cookie. You’ll see son, Alex will come through it okay.”
Walker turned his head back to Alex. He still couldn’t believe that she was lying in a hospital bed and he felt it was his fault. Earlier today, Alex had been laughing and running from one to another. Now she wasn’t.
Later that night, Walker still hadn’t left Alex’s bedside. He wasn’t planning to either. The doctor hadn’t argued with him and had agreed to let Walker stay with Alex, but only for one night.
Walker pulled up a chair so that he was sitting right by Alex’s bed. He picked up her left hand again and gave it a kiss before slowly drifting off to sleep.
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I hope you all enjoyed that chapter. So yeah let me know what y’all think. Thanks.
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For You
Jul 13, 2006 23:53:12 GMT -5
Post by Megan on Jul 13, 2006 23:53:12 GMT -5
Great chapter!! I hope you finish this one!! Cant wait to read more!!
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For You
Jul 14, 2006 11:20:51 GMT -5
Post by sniffen on Jul 14, 2006 11:20:51 GMT -5
Great chapter. I`m looking forward to read more. I was also wondering if anyone know if Lelani is going to finish the moments saga? I love that story.
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For You
Jul 14, 2006 14:19:25 GMT -5
Post by Kayla on Jul 14, 2006 14:19:25 GMT -5
What a great chapter! I feel so bad Walker. Unfortuantely, bad stuff happens during the worst moments sometimes. Hopefully, Alex will be okay, and they will be able to work out their problems. You've done a great job with the characters, too! :-)
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For You
Jul 19, 2006 22:50:18 GMT -5
Post by Me on Jul 19, 2006 22:50:18 GMT -5
Title: For You Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters used in this story. They belong to whoever own the rights to Walker, Texas Ranger. --------------------------------- Chapter 4: As Soon As We Can
Alex’s doctor came in the next morning and took her vitals. He was out of the room before Walker awoke.
When Walker awoke, his thoughts were immediately of Alex. At first, he thought that it had all been a dream, but he didn’t open his eyes. ‘No, Alex wasn’t hit by a car yesterday and he didn’t have a fight right before it happened. And she’s okay. I’ll see her at the office later today and we’ll meet up for lunch at C.D.’s. Then tonight we’ll go out to dinner and I’ll agree with her that we need to start making wedding plans.’ Walker thought to himself.
He sat there for several more moments, knowing that it wasn’t a dream; it was his reality. Slowly, Walker opened his eyes. He found Alex lying there, just as still as the night before.
Walker sat there for a while, just looking at Alex and still reflecting on the events that had unfolded the day before. He looked at her blonde hair. It was so soft and beautiful. And then he looked at her face. It was a little pale right now but Walker hardly noticed that. He saw the face of the woman he looked. Then slowly, Walker picked up Alex’s left hand, the only part of her body that wasn’t hooked up to a bunch of tubes and wires. He noticed that the doctors hadn’t removed her engagement ring. Walker kissed the back of her hand before gently laying it back on the bed and getting up to find the doctor.
“Where’s Alex Cahill’s doctor,” Walker asked the nurse behind the desk.
“He’s with someone else right now. Is there anything I can help you with Mr. Walker?” the nurse asked him.
Walker wasn’t sure if the nurse would know too much since he was sure the doctor had already checked her this morning, but he decided to ask her anyways. “I was wondering if Alex was doing any better this morning.”
“Well you’re not exactly family,” the nurse told him.
“Not yet. But we’re getting married and her father is in New York. He won’t be here till later tonight.” Walker told the nurse.
“When are you getting married?” the nurse asked him, hoping to take this mind off of what had happened to Alex for a minute.
Walker thought for a minute. Yesterday he wouldn’t even sat a date for the wedding with Alex and now as she was lying in a coma, he was telling the nurse they were getting married. Technically, they were, but he wasn’t sure when. Walker finally decided how to answer, “I hope we can get married as so as Alex is better.”
“Well, I wish you guys the best of luck,” the nurse told him before continuing, “Now you wanted to know how Miss Cahill is doing. Let me look and see if I have it here.” The nurse looked through some files, not finding it. She then started to look through some more. She finally found it. “Here it is. Let me see here. Hmm…Miss Cahill hasn’t had any major changes since yesterday when she was brought in. She’s still in a coma and it doesn’t look like she’ll be coming out of it anytime soon. But things change. Her legs are still broken and the doctor hopes to put them in cast later today sometime. And he checked her other again. He thinks that her wrist and/or arm may be broken in a couple of minor spots. He’s going to take x-rays later to make sure. Her neck is fine and her head is okay. Other then that there’s not much I can tell you.”
Walker stood there for a minute, taking in everything the nurse had told him. “Thank you,” he finally told her before heading back to Alex’s room.
Walker walked back into Alex’s room. Now she looked very, very pale and Walker was starting to become extremely worried about her.
He sat there with her left hand in his right hand for several minutes. ‘There has to be something else I can do besides sit around here all day.’ Walker thought to himself.
Standing up, Walker kissed Alex’s hand once again. He then remembered what the doctor had said about talking to Alex while she was in a coma.
“Alex, honey, I’m not sure if you can hear me right now, but I love you. I love you so much and I’m so sorry I don’t tell you enough. I just want you to know how sorry I am about the fight that we had yesterday. I don’t know why I keep putting off setting a wedding date; I guess I just think if I take the final step of marriage, that you’ll be taken away from me like everyone else. Alex, please don’t leave me. I promise as soon as you’re out of here, I’ll help you plan our wedding. I’ll help you with whatever needs to be done. Just don’t die. Please Alex, wake up.” Walker told her and still Alex lay still. It was then Walker realized there was something he could do. If sitting around the hospital talking to Alex all day wasn’t going to do much, he could at least find the man who had hit her. Walker looked back to Alex. “Honey I’m going to go to the office for a while and see if Trivette has found anything on the man who hit you.”
Walker turned around and headed to the door. He had just opened the door when he heard the beep of one of the monitors. He looked around and saw that Alex’s heart monitor had a flat line on it.
“SOMEONE! HELP!” Walker yelled out of the door.
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Hope everyone enjoyed that chapter. So yeah please review and let me know what you think.
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For You
Jul 19, 2006 23:09:17 GMT -5
Post by Kayla on Jul 19, 2006 23:09:17 GMT -5
When Walker awoke, his thoughts were immediately of Alex. At first, he thought that it had all been a dream, but he didn’t open his eyes.
I loved this part. You just really captured the moment of waking up and not being sure as to what happened. It's very well-written! I could just get the sense of it being so fast paced from your writing!
He then remembered what the doctor had said about talking to Alex while she was in a coma.
Aww, that was sweet! I hope it helps Alex.
Walker turned around and headed to the door. He had just opened the door when he heard the beep of one of the monitors. He looked around and saw that Alex’s heart monitor had a flat line on it.
Alex doesn't want Walker to leave; that's what it has to be!
Great chapter!
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For You
Jul 20, 2006 7:12:07 GMT -5
Post by sniffen on Jul 20, 2006 7:12:07 GMT -5
Once again, a great chapter. I feel so bad for Walker though. Can`t wait to read more
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For You
Jul 22, 2006 5:36:10 GMT -5
Post by Megan on Jul 22, 2006 5:36:10 GMT -5
Awesome chapter!! She cant die!!! Hurry and write the next part!!
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For You
Jul 31, 2006 22:17:37 GMT -5
Post by Me on Jul 31, 2006 22:17:37 GMT -5
Thanks guys glad you enjoyed that chapter! Hope you like the next one. Sorry I'm a couple of days late on my update, but I've had lots going on.
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